What do you think about the start of my story?

I think it's quite interesting, something I could hook onto, start typing some more! I want to read the rest! You should try to get the readers attached to the character and not rush too far into things too quickly. But so far I love it, a few spelling mistakes and you should make the speech a different to the speech we use now, I see you've already done that with the Elves, but yes, keep going. Also, I think more description, on the people,what does she look like? what do the elves look like ? What does the mistress look like? What about the people? Did they stop and stare ? Or did they simply brush past her not thinking twice? As if she was nothing more than a speck of dust ? Or were there no people at all? More description and I'll think you have nailed it. I could feel the anger she had, it was brilliant, almost made me angry as well. But yes you've done wonderful so far and I definitely think you should keep going. *claps* :D